tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6809397229388554340.post6403427461330611726..comments2010-12-19T21:35:34.758-08:00Comments on The Ninthlobby - Friends and Dreams: Boxing Boy The Script: The Movie: The Story (2)Ninthlobby: Shanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04569488602800366501noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6809397229388554340.post-60661008055460793872010-12-19T21:35:34.758-08:002010-12-19T21:35:34.758-08:00I think your writing was good in the first half bu...I think your writing was good in the first half but after the part where they had sins for the rest of the night, it just sounded like an infantile day dream seriously.Envyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12119441784224201743noreply@blogger.com